Good if you like the whole fadish/sketchy thing, but otherwise I'm gonna have to critisize a couple things here, being a DMC3 freak myself.
First off, you never finished Rebellion (the blade itself). It didn't end in a point, either that or it was way too short to go past the wings. And I know you wanted the picture to look not perfected but an interesting sketched look, but you made it appear as if Devil Dante had a red jacket on, not his trench. Yes, Dante still has his trench on in DT.
On a more positive note, you still managed to keep the whole entire look together, which is the basis of art. No DMC fan would look at this and be like "Wtf is that?". Also, the sketch effect looked pretty cool for this particular stance.
I give you a 3/5 for effort and overall completion.